Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Memoir of a special place

The ski field was usual enough; it had 
A lift, snow, a carpark, clouds 
Floating over it, and even a big cafe
I never go to. My brothers, my friends and I
Did what boys do - tail whips off the jumps, 
Racing down the steep slopes, dodging  the strict
Lift worker, killing time on the slow lift, and gobbling 
down some sausages.
Doing nothing important.


  1. Great job I really like it I really got the feeling that I was in it like you and that that was your holiday.

  2. I felt like I was there with you I can relate to you experience!

  3. I liked it because you used a lot of good language